Everything Must Go

A short story

I’m toying with an idea for a book. So, I wrote a short story to see if it would satisfy the urge, but it made it worse. You’ll see this as a book or at least part of one, one day. Lucky you for getting a preview. Well hopefully lucky…this might be shit and I need to stop. Please let me know in the comments. I love a critique.

Everything Must Go

The bidding on unit 214 started at ten dollars, and Sam was already doing the math on resale before the auctioneer finished his sentence. Her math was always bad. It never once slowed her down. Wren stood a half step behind her, phone already out, pulling up comps out of pure habit.

“Junk,” Wren said, not quietly. “Look at the door seal. Water’s been getting in for years.”

“You said that about the piano unit.”

“The piano unit had a piano in it that we sold for four hundred dollars.”

“See, and yet here we are, still doing this every Saturday.”

Sam leaned in to squint at the door seal herself, and Gary from three units down called out, not bothering to lower his voice, “You two gonna bid or just stand there measuring each other’s pupils again.”

“Bid,” Wren said, too fast, and stepped back like the heat had gotten to her.

The regulars stood in the shade sizing up the units three rows over that still had furniture visible under the gap, because nobody serious wasted a Saturday on something as small as 214. Wren knew most of them by name now, three years into a business that had started as a way to pay off Sam’s car and survived by taking the chances the guys with box trucks wouldn’t bother with. The small units went for the price of a tank of gas, if they went at all. Most weekends that meant mildew. Once or twice a year it meant the piano unit. Nobody so much as glanced at 214, except a woman near the back Wren didn’t recognize, gloves on despite the ninety-four degree heat, watching it like it owed her money.

The auctioneer cracked the padlock and threw the door up. Two seconds of flashlight sweep. Boxes stacked chest-high, a couple of trunks, something that might have been a rolled-up rug wedged in the back. Standard nothing.

“Twenty,” Gary said, mostly out of habit, already glancing back toward the row with the box springs visible under the door.

“Twenty-five,” said Sam, glancing sideways at Wren before she committed, an old reflex she’d never dropped, needing the nod even though she never waited for it.

The gloved woman’s hand twitched, like she was about to raise it, and then she didn’t. She stepped back into the shade instead, like she’d changed her mind.

“Twenty-five going once.”

Nobody else bid. Wren caught the gloved woman’s face for a second before she turned away, and it wasn’t disappointment. It was relief.

“Sold, to the ladies up front, for twenty-five dollars.”

“See,” Sam said, already walking toward the door with the bolt cutters, close enough that her shoulder bumped Wren’s. “This is why you let me talk.”

They hauled it all back to Wren’s garage in two trips, the back seats of Sam’s Outback folded flat and still not quite big enough. Pluff Mud Pickers operated out of that garage: string lights over a folding table, a whiteboard where Wren tracked inventory in handwriting so tidy it made Sam’s look like a ransom note, and an unspoken Friday ritual of pizza and inventory prep that always ended with both of them asleep on opposite ends of the same couch, which was, Wren’s sister kept pointing out, an awful lot of couple behavior for two people who insisted they weren’t.

The first trunk was ordinary. Winter coats, a broken lamp, a coffee can full of loose change that Sam immediately claimed as tip money and dropped into the pocket of Wren’s overalls. The second trunk was heavier than it had any right to be, and when Wren got the latch open, both their hands landed on the lid at the same time and stayed there a beat longer than the moment required.

“Okay,” Wren said, pulling hers back first. “That’s not a rug.”

It was a long wooden case, built to hold a rifle by the look of the hinges, and when Sam popped it open there wasn’t a rifle inside. There was a row of stakes, hand-carved, labeled in careful block letters. ASH. HAWTHORN. WHITE OAK, DO NOT SUBSTITUTE. Next to them, nested in cut foam, a straight razor with a blade so bright it looked wet, and a card that read SILVER PLATE, DO NOT USE ON SKIN CONTACT SUBJECTS.

“This is a costume thing,” Wren said, in the voice of someone trying very hard to make that true.

“There’s a revolver in here, Wren.”

“Is it loaded?”

“It’s loaded with bullets that are the wrong color to be bullets.”

Sam’s hands weren’t quite steady around it. It wasn’t excitement making them shake, not the good version of nerves that came with a solid find. This was smaller and more real: actual fear. Wren clocked it before Sam could hide it, reached over without a word, and took the revolver out of her hands. She thumbed the cylinder open and knocked the cartridges into her palm in one motion, fast and unthinking, a leftover reflex from a childhood spent in the mountains around guns long before she’d ever spent one around a folding table. She set the empty revolver down at the far end of the table as if putting it in time-out. Sam let her. They didn’t talk about it.

They spread it all out across the folding table until it stopped looking like salvage and started looking like evidence. Vials of something clear with Latin written on masking tape. A coil of wire, tagged consecrated silver, 90%, do not touch bare-handed, which Sam picked up anyway before Wren smacked her hand.

“Ow.”

“You’re welcome.”

A Charleston street map, decades old, with red pins and no legend. And at the bottom of the second trunk, wrapped in oilskin like it mattered more than anything else in the unit, a leather ledger.

Wren opened it while Sam eyed the revolver from across the table like a dog that had already bitten someone once. The handwriting was cramped, practical, a man writing fast because he had somewhere to be. Names. Dates. Addresses, some crossed out, some circled twice. Next to each one, a short note in shorthand that took Wren a minute to work out, and then didn’t want to be worked out anymore once she had it.

Ratcliffe, J. Confirmed, 4/12. No incident.

Boone twins. Relocated before contact, flag for spring.

Ferris account closed. Handled personally.

Wren closed the ledger slowly, like it might notice.

“Sam,” she said, and something in her voice made Sam look up from the street map for the first time all night. “I don’t think this was a costume thing.”

They tried to be responsible about it: Wren photographed everything for the spreadsheet before either of them decided what to do with it, because that was the rule, inventory first, panic later. Wren had a category in that spreadsheet for weird, and she’d sworn, more than once, that she’d never need a subcategory. Tonight was not going well for that vow. She posted three photos to the regional pickers’ group with the caption estate find, help ID? looks like movie prop stuff, any collectors interested, because weird stuff always sold, and weird stuff with a story sold even better.

By midnight the post had forty comments, most of them jokes. Bro found the Blade starter kit. Somebody’s dad was really committed to the LARP. And one private message, sent at 12:41 a.m., from an account with no photo and no post history: Take those photos down. Do not post anything else from that unit. I can meet you tomorrow.

Wren texted Sam, both of them somehow still awake at one in the morning instead of just going to sleep, because that would have been the normal thing to do and they had never once done the normal thing.

already deleted the post, Wren texted after. meet at the garage tomorrow? 11? bringing the bat.

obviously

The woman who came in at eleven on the dot was not the gloved woman from the auction. She couldn’t have been older than thirty by the look of her, gorgeous enough that it felt a little insulting, dressed for a much colder climate than a Charleston July. No sweat, either, not one bead of it, though Wren wouldn’t think twice about that until much later. Sam sat up a fraction straighter. Wren noticed, and decided, privately, that she hated that.

“My name is Augusta,” she said. “I run an estate service. A specialized one.” Her eyes moved from Wren to Sam and back, taking in the standing-too-close, the matching worried expressions, and filed it away without comment. “For Dale Pruitt. Who I’m guessing is the man whose unit you won on Saturday.”

“We didn’t know his name,” Wren said. “The auction doesn’t tell you names.”

“No. It wouldn’t.” Augusta sat in the chair Sam offered and folded her hands on the table. They were very still hands, the stillness of someone who’d stopped needing to fidget a long time ago and never really started again. “Dale worked for an organization that doesn’t use a name in front of outsiders. Internally we call it the Vigil. Dale’s job, and I’ll say this plainly because you’ve clearly worked out this wasn’t a costume thing, was hunting.”

“Hunting what,” Sam said, even though the stakes on the table had already answered that.

“Vampires. Occasionally other things, but mostly vampires.” Augusta said it flat and administrative, the same tone you’d use for actuarial work. “It’s legal. That’s the part that usually takes people the longest to sit with. We have no legal standing. Not as citizens, not as persons, not even as protected wildlife. There’s no permit required and no body to report to, because as far as the law is concerned, there’s no body at all. Dale kept very good records because his employer required it. That ledger is a log of his work over eleven years.”

Wren looked down at Ferris account closed. Handled personally, and felt something cold move through her that had nothing to do with the AC.

“You’re one of them,” she said. It wasn’t really a question.

“I am.” Augusta didn’t flinch, didn’t perform reassurance, just let the fact sit there. “I’d like to buy the ledger back. Not the tools, you’re welcome to those. The ledger has names in it. Some are closed accounts, which is a term I’d rather not translate over coffee. Some aren’t. Some are people still alive because Dale never got to them, and I’d very much like them to stay that way before that book ends up photographed online again.”

Sam and Wren looked at each other, a look they’d been perfecting since college: the couch they didn’t flip because the seller was crying, the wedding ring they spent three weeks reuniting with a stranger’s daughter instead of listing, both of them a little too invested in other people’s happy endings for two people who’d never quite managed the conversation about their own.

“How much were you going to offer,” Sam asked.

“Whatever you’d have gotten from a collector. More, if it makes the guilt easier.”

Wren elbowed her before she could look too pleased about that. “We don’t want your money,” she said. “We want to know what happens to the names in that book if we hand it to you instead of, I don’t know, burning it.”

Augusta looked at her for a second like she hadn’t expected the question, and something in her very still face loosened, just enough. “Then I suppose we should discuss that over something stronger than coffee.”

“Stay,” Wren said. “We’ve got more to talk about, and there’s bourbon.” Sam was already up, pulling the bottle down from the shelf where she kept it for emergencies, setting out three glasses instead of coffee mugs. Augusta stayed past midnight, patient in a way that made Wren start to suspect immortality was mostly just a lot of practice. They worked down the list together: a name, a quick check against Dale’s notes, then closed or flagged depending on whether whoever it belonged to might still be in danger.

“How long have you two been together,” Augusta asked, somewhere around the fourth name, not looking up.

“We’re not,” Wren said.

“Together,” Sam said, at the exact same time, a half second slower and a beat too loud.

Augusta looked between them, unbothered, like a woman confirming something she’d already worked out an hour ago, and went back to the ledger.

When Sam got up to refill the bourbon, Augusta turned the full weight of her attention on Wren. “You could save yourself a great deal of time,” she said, “if you just told her.”

Wren’s whole face went hot. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

“Of course you don’t.” Something amused and ancient moved through Augusta’s expression. “You’ve spent the entire evening a half step from touching her and calling it professional caution. It’s sweet. It’s also a waste of a Saturday you’ll never get back.”

Sam came back before Wren could decide whether to be annoyed or grateful, and the moment folded itself back into the ledger.

An hour later, when Wren went inside for a blanket against the AC, Augusta turned that same attention on Sam.

“You sat up a little straighter when I walked in.”

Sam’s ears went red. “I did not.”

“You did. Don’t worry, I’m flattered. I’m also not the one you should be sitting up straighter for.” Augusta topped off her glass. “You’ve had a good while of practice not knowing that. That’s a long time to keep a secret from someone who already knows it too. For what it’s worth, you should tell her. Whatever it is you keep deciding not to say. Some of us don’t have centuries to waste getting to it, and neither, notably, do you.”

Wren came back with the blanket, and Sam said nothing, and the three of them went back to the ledger like the garage hadn’t just gotten a great deal more honest without either of them noticing.

By the time Augusta stood to leave, blazer still somehow unwrinkled, she’d gone from unreadable stranger to something closer to a terrifying, useful aunt, the type who’d rearrange your spice rack without asking and turn out to be right about it. She left a card on the table on her way out. No name, just a phone number and, underneath, handwriting so neat it looked printed: Call if the book gets heavy. Some weight isn’t meant for two people.

At the door, she paused. “Lock the garage tonight. Not everyone in this business is as polite as I am.”

The door shut behind her before either of them could ask what she meant.

They didn’t sell the revolver, or the stakes, not yet, though Augusta had mentioned a whole undocumented economy for retired hunting gear that made Wren’s collector network look like a lemonade stand. What they kept was the ledger, waiting on the open accounts they’d flagged to work through in daylight, once the adrenaline and the gas station coffee had worn off.

Wren updated the spreadsheet out of habit, typing Unit 214 – Miscellaneous into the category column before she deleted it and left the cell blank. There wasn’t a category for this yet.

Sam sat on the edge of the table next to her, close enough that their knees touched, and this time neither of them bothered pretending they were about to move apart.

“So,” Sam said. “Same time next week? See what else the county’s got going up?”

“After today?”

“Wren. We just found out vampires are real and it’s legal to hunt them. You think I’m skipping the next auction now?”

Wren laughed, the first real laugh of the day, and closed the spreadsheet. “Twenty-five dollars. That’s what this cost us.”

“Best flip we ever made,” Sam said, not looking away this time, “and we haven’t even sold anything yet.”

“Augusta got you alone earlier,” Wren said. Not a question.

Sam’s jaw did the thing it did when she was deciding whether to lie about something. “She said I should stop deciding not to say something. Presumptuous, for a woman I’ve known four hours.”

“She said the same thing to me. Nearly word for word.”

“Efficient. I respect that in a woman who’s probably older than the state of South Carolina.” A beat. “Are you going to make me go first?”

Wren thought about the revolver, about the fear that had been on Sam’s face right before she’d taken it from her, and about how she hadn’t had to think for even a second before reaching for it. “I took that gun from you earlier because you were scared, and I couldn’t just sit there and watch that. And when I actually think about it, that’s not new. I’ve been doing that for a long time and calling it friendship.” She made herself keep looking at Sam instead of the table. “I’m in love with you. That’s the thing Augusta meant.”

“I know,” Sam said, quiet now, no jokes left in it. “I’m in love with you too. Have been for about three years, if we’re doing full honesty tonight.”

“Three years.” Wren dropped her head into her hands. “We’re idiots. We are actual, certified idiots.”

“Complete idiots,” Sam agreed, sounding delighted about it. “I’ve got a whole timeline. It starts with the piano unit.”

“That’s not funny.”

“It’s a little funny.” Sam’s knee stayed right where it was, against hers. “Gary’s going to be insufferable about this.”

“Gary doesn’t need to know anything.”

“Gary’s going to know within the hour. Gary always knows.” Sam reached over and tucked a piece of hair behind Wren’s ear, unhurried, like she’d already done it a thousand times in a life they just hadn’t gotten around to living yet. “For the record, I wasn’t measuring your pupils back there. I know exactly what I was doing.”

“What were you doing.”

“This,” Sam said, and kissed her.

It was not, Wren would think later, an elegant kiss, both of them half perched on a folding table surrounded by consecrated silver and a dead man’s ledger, laughing into it because three years of not doing this had built up a pressure that finally had somewhere to go. Somewhere in there Sam’s elbow caught one of the stakes and sent it rolling off the table, and Wren caught it out of the air without even looking, which was either a very good sign or a very concerning one. Neither of them examined that too closely either.

Outside, past the string lights, something shifted along the hedge at the edge of the driveway. Gloved, maybe. Too still to be nothing, too quick to be sure of. Gone before either of them could have looked up, if either of them had been inclined to look up at all.

They clung to each other instead, holding on like letting go might undo the last five minutes. When they finally broke apart, Sam kept her forehead against Wren’s like she wasn’t in any hurry to put the distance back.

“For what it’s worth,” Wren said, a little breathless, “the piano unit was two and a half years ago. Not three.”

“I’m rounding up. I’ve earned it.”

Wren laughed, low, and took Sam’s hand, already walking backward toward the door that led into the house, pulling Sam with her, a look on her face that made her intentions extremely clear.

“The ledger,” Sam said, laughing, letting herself be pulled anyway. “We should probably lock the safe.”

Wren groaned, doubled back, and shoved the ledger into the safe two-handed, spinning the dial without really looking at it, faster than either of them had moved all night for anything that wasn’t each other. “Locked. Happy? Inside. Now.”

Sam didn’t wait to be told twice. She caught Wren’s hand and pulled her the rest of the way through the door before either of them could find one more thing to double back for.

Gary’s text about Thursday’s auction went unread, forgotten somewhere between the table and the door. There would be other auctions, more of the Vigil probably, more names in ledgers, and maybe, if that shape by the hedge meant anything, more reasons to lock the door behind them. That was a problem for the morning. Tonight there was only the garage, going dark behind them, and three years of a joke that had finally stopped being one.

If you want more of Pluff Mud Pickers, the Vigil, these two idiots who finally said it out loud, and whoever was watching them do it, let me know. This one’s got legs.